Skip directly to content

Ideas for an Online Magazine of Mormon Fantasy and Science Fiction

on Sun, 10/28/2012 - 06:48

The success of James and Nicole Goldberg's 2012 Everyday Mormon Writer Four Centuries of Mormon Stories Contest in producing high quality Mormon sci-fi has me thinking the time may be ripe for a magazine of Mormon science fiction (and fantasy, too). I'm in the process of working up an article about the five entries that qualify as sci-fi, but in the meantime, it would be nice to get a discussion going to see what notions folks have about such a thing and in what ways, beside submitting stories, they'd be willing to contribute.

Running Review 6: Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, Part 6

on Sun, 01/06/2013 - 16:24

My first real foray into organized approaches to story writing took the form of Paul Gulino's Screenwriting: The Sequence Approach, which I stumbled on at my local library here in Kaohsiung City, Taiwan. Apparently some former English teacher was really into stage and screen writing, because though books on writing short stories and novels are rare in the English stacks there, books on theatre and screen hang off them like shield-backed katydids off wheat in a dry summer. Anyway, it was clear that the screenwriting business had its act together when it came to structure.

Running Review 5: Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, Part 5

on Sun, 01/06/2013 - 12:51

Brooks's third element of storytelling is theme.

According to Brooks, there is a Theme Continuum, with themeless sitcom (Seinfeld) at one end, outright propaganda (C.S. Lewis) at the other, and exploration (John Irving: The Cider House Rules) dead centre.

Brook's analysis is blurred by his prejudices (sitcoms are not always themeless; they are often propagandist, in fact), but if we put aside his examples, we can see the continuum in evidence all around us, including in our own work.

Theme, however, is hard to avoid and it's really more a matter of effectiveness than of presence.

Running Review 4: Story Engineering, Part 4

on Sat, 12/22/2012 - 12:00

In Part 3 (chapters 8 through 15) of Story Engineering, Larry Brooks continues to deliver on his promise to expose the nitty-gritty and give would-be authors guidance they can actually work with. In this section, though, there's no need to read, reread and reformulate. It's pretty well cut and dried, perhaps not least because, as Brooks points out more than once, most fiction writing guides focus very heavily, if not exclusively, on the topic of this section--character. The topic has been thoroughly plumbed before.

Calling assertions that character is plot and plot is character "grad school

Running Review 3: Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, Part 3

on Sun, 12/16/2012 - 16:34

I really struggled over Brooks' discussion of idea, concept and premise, but after applying what I thought he might be saying to one of my recent stories, I think I finally get it.

An idea is basically a story about statement. The topic can resemble any of the four elements of a story (concept, character, structure or theme), but is merely the seed of a story, the very beginning of thinking about it. You might think, "What if machines were intelligent?" (a what if statement that would become part of the concept) or "I want to write a story about a self-aware computer" (a character that would

Running Review 2: Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, Part 2

on Sat, 12/08/2012 - 16:52

After all that well-analogied hype, Brooks gives a one-page overview of his four elements and two skills, which are

  1. Concept
  2. Character
  3. Theme
  4. Structure
  5. Scene execution
  6. Writing voice

Concept is what Brooks calls premise, best couched in a what-if statement, the answer to which "leads to further 'what if?' questions in a branching and descending hierarchy", the "collective whole" of which becomes the story. [1]

The character is "a hero" whom "[w]e don’t need to like", but for whom "we do need to root." [2]

Theme is "what your story is illuminating about real life." [3]

Structure is " [w]hat comes

Running Review 1: Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, Part 1

on Sat, 12/08/2012 - 15:52

Full title: Story Engineering: Mastering the Six Core Competencies of Successful Writing (Kindle Edition)

Navigation: Cover, Table of Contents, Beginning, Page or Location

Brooks spends the first twenty-two pages of his book hyping about the importance and value of the Six Core Competencies, which he divides into "the four basic elements of the story" and "the two narrative skills required to effectively implement them"[1] . Hyping is common practice in how-to books, and Brooks uses the practice well to separate his book from the mass of its peers, "few [of which] offer anything about how

The Smoke Has Settled into Dust

on Mon, 11/12/2012 - 06:17

The smoke has settled into dust
The trucks now redden in another place
A scar is starting

(c) 2012 Mark Penny

Having Just Finished Reading The Middle Heart

on Mon, 11/12/2012 - 06:07

  Look what a mess you've made!
  The broken throne
--and bowl,
  the cuts and bruises
  in the tourists' glare,
  the crumpled spirits of the chrysalis.
  Why must the phoenix rise on flame?

(c) 2012 Mark Penny

Dry November

on Sun, 11/04/2012 - 23:51

The harvest's rusting in the barn
Iambic-ambic-ick
A year's offenses tindering
Just half a spark
Could light the beacon
All that golden grass
Gone jaundiced
In a slanted sun
A pallid yellow pool
Sharp through a window
To a point
That has no patience for itself
A murmured cigarette
Could make a murder of the mould
That's always growing
In the barn

(c) 2012 Mark Penny

Pages